Wednesday, September 21, 2005

drive.

pink, plastic, tulip petals
peel back candy-coated olympic medals

marking silver, second place procrastination
in this race we almost win
but always lose

it's perpetual
never-ending
impossible to come in last

but this is the last time
i'll be able to let you look at me like that

highway speeds
leave windows down and hopes up

and bitter-proof seat belts
hold hasty second-thoughts at bay

100 miles per hour away

... i used to get car sick in this sort of thing.

5 comments:

shenry said...

Nice. I especially like the first two stanzas.

Anonymous said...

Hazy
Lazy

Flakie
Like ricky lakie

Simply
Limply

encasement
freedom was meant

escape philosophies
sorry, apologies

;-)

Anonymous said...

Hazy
Lazy

Flakie
Like ricky lakie

Simply
Limply

encasement
freedom was meant

escape philosophies
sorry, apologies

;-)

Anonymous said...

didn't mean anonomous

&

duplication due to hesitation

Can't read a left click

sarah (tales of ordinary madness) said...

i love the look of this site!

glad you're back.